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On manillascissor wrote:

a glow surrounds your face
with each beating minute
the heart grows fonder
caught up in the waterspouts of life
hard to see beyond your outstreched hands
cup your hands to hold the water
but it flows nonstop
as if laughing
yet another force
uncontrolled by man
drenched in uncertainty
crushed with doubt
washing in with vacany

so let it all go
embrace this moment
rise to the top to see the clouds
leave the world behind you
and make a new day
a new life
a fresh clean slate
full of beauty
that glows around your face

in my time of dying