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Keymaster
On manillascissor wrote:

a feeling so empty
it’s really not a feeling at all
the color black
staining and disolutioning
into your very fibrous being

a painful morphing
the swallow of sweet heartache
the stench of what used to be
a constant reminder
of everpresent failing

so far beyond down
so away from it all
turned your back on yourself
on your knees
into a corner

once the hurt is gone
what’s left to feel?

in my time of dying