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Keymaster
On manillascissor wrote:

a black dot
off in the distance
a cool spot
in a endless desert

coming closer
the spot widens
opening up, beckoning

i push aside
and walk inside
and kiss the sun goodbye

water trickles and little eyes move
staring and scaring
pulling in closer

my new home
devoid of you
devoid of me

it’s so dark
where are my hands
i feel nothing

i’m so alone
an echo my only partner

in my time of dying