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Keymaster
On manillascissor wrote:

the sound continues to drown
raining down the great escape
the swirly exit sign
swinging back and forth from the loft
don’t scream fire in a crowded theater
you may hurt someone
but then again
you may get out
of watching this shit movie

fire fire rush to the door
climbing atop the others
women and children first
chivalry above the others
and even now you know it ain’t real
and break through the white canvas
the screaming pictures in technicolor
bleed to the floor in rainbowed water
staining the palms in purple eternity

the doorhandle is red and blue
as the tape reel spins off the loom

in my time of dying