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Keymaster
On manillascissor wrote:

she said goodbye
eyes closed and opened wide
looking up with a tear crushed eye
hair brushed to the side

her silhouette walked away
off to find another day
leaving him so far away
no words were left to say

all the pain had soaked in
and all the words were spoken
and with each spirit broken
you hold on to a little token

a little reminder slight perfection
insignificant immense reflection
that points out costly imperfection
carry with you to next destination

in my time of dying