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Keymaster
On manillascissor wrote:

yeah, we closed our eyes at the same time
holding onto a reality that was so sublime
giving into one another, forever and ever
the chance that we could lose each other, never

soon enough, a distance grew between you and i
inexplicable, no more kisses during the night
turning around, hoping to lock eyes once more
seeing only darkness, these eyes just feel so sore

tell myself, things will be all right in time
knowing deep down, it’s just another lie
hoping to hold you just for one more chance
longing to feel you as we take our last dance

these are the memories i have of you and i
the quick pains that strike deep down inside
a fond recollection is all that is left to see
a time that once knew only you and me

in my time of dying