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Keymaster
On manillascissor wrote:

just as the heated light is silenced for the night
listen to the velvet fabric as it hits the hardwood plank
fading red pastels bleed into the lofty floor
with curtains down, the last aria was sang
the crowd exits, and now the cast bows
cheers and jeers are soon to follow
but only you can feel the silence of the end
as it begins to slither around your neck
one last breath for you and i

in my time of dying